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Well mastered :)

You will get 2 more stars when you finish the song :P

It's good to hear a well-mastered tune where you can hear the drum cleanly! Keep me posted for the complete version...if you make one, break out into a fast and full tune if you know what I mean?!

- BeefourMusic -

kirja100 responds:

Thanks!
I'll give you full track, when I ll do it :)

FL 3???

Sounds like FL3 to me? Try upgrading to FL9 and see what difference it makes to your song :)

- BeefourMusic -

Everlasting-Elements responds:

You're funny. I use FL 9. I make my own instruments, I don't use them presetters!!

9 stars because...

you think you need help with this? Sounds to me like you are on the right track. Great song, pianos ftw and love the quick lead filter fill at 0:40 if that makes sense? lol.

Add onto it, make over the 3min mark and I will give a 10 upon resubmission :)

PS. More of the beeptune (404?) is required...maybe with piano over the top for the final minute of your song?

Lithorph responds:

Haha thanks for your review, I do know that this song has some potential, but its not good yet, it needs to be worked on but i haven't really gotten anything done in 3 weeks. Also the part where someone said my piano melody sounded exactly the same as the intro to (ekowraith - waiting for tonight) and i cant really say it doesnt. Anyways i dont know if ill work on this or not, we'll see.

Mastering sound great!

The song sounded great in my speakers and I liked the change in bassline. Feels to me like it needs a soft layer phasing in and out softly in the background as well as the piano & synth.

Pitty, you lost it. I lost a few of mine too when my HDD and ext HDD both decided to crap themselves :(

PS. What is the Review Request Club???

- BeefourMusic -

DavidRx responds:

yea a ambient buzz in the back :3 i did that with my ither track (discoSex) u shud check it out...

yea ;S my HDD got virus -.-

Review Requeste club is a forum club that rly reviews ure requested tracks....so if u got a track u shud put it out there...they will review ure track and help u out :D their awesome...(just click on the forums and then on audio)

and then u can use the search engien on the bottom and type review :3

thx for the review...and make sure 2 listen 2 discoSex XD

All fixed! :)

Even on my crap work speakers, I can hear the difference in drums to your original submission! Makes a huge difference. Not sure if this should be in techno or video game though????

- BeefourMusic -

i9incher responds:

yeah i changed it over to video game.

Voice mastering???

Doesn't sound right to me but the lyrics and music sound great! I presume you didn't have access to a proper studio for voice recording and quality mics?

- BeefourMusic -

AK-49 responds:

yeah, we spoke through the computer lol and used garageband to edit everything including vocals

Your artist name...

..Makes me laugh everytime for some reason. Love the piano in this track, would be fun to make a trance tune out of it too I reckon!

- BeefourMusic -

BAZmotherfucker responds:

Now THAT would be interesting... ;]

Remake!

It is 3 months later, hopefully u understand FL a bit better now and can turn this into a great track! I like the melody but you need to add effects, compress your drum, add crashes and snare fills etc... Fruity Loops is a powerful program once you know how to use it. Good luck.

- BeefourMusic -

i9incher responds:

dude thanks for the review man. yeah, I lost the origional track to this so If i do remake it it would have to be from scratch. then again, I think it would be better that way anyways. thanks for taking the time for the review man. you get so many views and listens andstuff it's a real honor to have you take the time to do that. plus I'm glad you like the melody.

It worked...lol

I was thinking that it was putting me to sleep at the end and then just read the song title again! lol. This is more a chillout tune than dance tune, kind of expect to hear it out third disc of a ministry of sound compilation amongst the chillout tunes.

- BeefourMusic -

Thebigdill responds:

Well - my original intent of this song was dance (everything except piano and sound of bells at the end are used for dance music), and i don't think i saw a "chill out" category, so i put it here.

Nice melodies!

I really liked the start and the melodies used. Only thing that I would recommend is fixing the extra drum beat u put into ur drum loop, sounds out of place to me or needs to be used every 4th bar (not every bar) and maybe compress ur drums to make them stand out more. Other than that, great first tune!

FrameWork responds:

lol, I didn't see that anyone else had review this, but thanks man! My other songs are far better as this one was far to repetitive. I was tempted and to make this one this one again as I like some of the melodies and I'll look into this extra drum beat >.<

-Framework-

Hey all, I love making any dance, hardstyle, acid/break tune. I use FL Studio for my tracks and will hopefully have a many more tracks on the way. If you have any questions, you can email me on beefourmusic@live.co m.au Check out my Facebook Page!

BeefourMusic @SUB4RU

Age 38, Male

Gold Coast, Australia

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