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You posted it, lol

"Or I could try rapping?" hahaha.

It would actually sound pretty good if someone wrote you some lyrics I think.

- BeefourMusic -

Darren Mackay

Crashes and stabs/hits

Nice dark tune, I will never get bored of listening to that drum cos it has a such a wicked bass to it! :)

You need to add some crashes, hits and stabs to your tune and the odd snare fill. It gives more energy to the tune.

- BeefourMusic - 8/10 5/5

Correct

You are correct....this is a mess BUT somehow comes together?!?!? haha

Not sure how you did it but nice one!

- BeefourMusic -

Sounds like...

I am listening to a Ministry of Sound album! It sounds like a song already being played in clubs and on the radio. I think the downfall for you is that it isn't in English so people lose interest since they can't understand what the song is about.

Overall, great song and should be on a ministry of sound album.

- BeefourMusic -

teamisvaffel responds:

ya i think i should start wright translation to the songs thank you so much for you're reveiw and im glad you injoyed the song but on downfall to that is i dont know how to spell really well so i'll try to give it a wearl

-team-

So clear!

I don't know the original but the production of this tune is awesome, every instrument is so clear! Nice track!

- BeefourMusic -

Caine1989 responds:

Thank you very much man! Glad you like this one!

As said by the reviews below....

All it needs is more bass to become complete, the rest sounds awesome!

- BeefourMusic -

Well mastered :)

You will get 2 more stars when you finish the song :P

It's good to hear a well-mastered tune where you can hear the drum cleanly! Keep me posted for the complete version...if you make one, break out into a fast and full tune if you know what I mean?!

- BeefourMusic -

kirja100 responds:

Thanks!
I'll give you full track, when I ll do it :)

Good melodies and mix

You would get an extra star if your drum didn't sound so flat, i think it needs to be punchier for the style of song you have gone for. Build ups are good and melodies aren't too bad. Nice work.

- BeefourMusic -

FL 3???

Sounds like FL3 to me? Try upgrading to FL9 and see what difference it makes to your song :)

- BeefourMusic -

Everlasting-Elements responds:

You're funny. I use FL 9. I make my own instruments, I don't use them presetters!!

9 stars because...

you think you need help with this? Sounds to me like you are on the right track. Great song, pianos ftw and love the quick lead filter fill at 0:40 if that makes sense? lol.

Add onto it, make over the 3min mark and I will give a 10 upon resubmission :)

PS. More of the beeptune (404?) is required...maybe with piano over the top for the final minute of your song?

Lithorph responds:

Haha thanks for your review, I do know that this song has some potential, but its not good yet, it needs to be worked on but i haven't really gotten anything done in 3 weeks. Also the part where someone said my piano melody sounded exactly the same as the intro to (ekowraith - waiting for tonight) and i cant really say it doesnt. Anyways i dont know if ill work on this or not, we'll see.

Hey all, I love making any dance, hardstyle, acid/break tune. I use FL Studio for my tracks and will hopefully have a many more tracks on the way. If you have any questions, you can email me on beefourmusic@live.co m.au Check out my Facebook Page!

BeefourMusic @SUB4RU

Age 38, Male

Gold Coast, Australia

Joined on 5/24/10

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